Wednesday, 4 November 2009

Section 1: Background to the Thriller Genre =]

A stereotypical thriller is a film that pursues a goal all the way through the film, e.g. to find a killer. This involves plot twists to create suspense and gives thrills to keep the audience intrigued as the plot builds up by using certain enigma codes & making people question their certainty about what is going to happen. Some words that are associated with thrillers are: - Dark, Surreal, Secrecy, Anonymity, Danger, Suspense, Death & Tension Building and the initial affect a thriller tries to generate is suspense and tension. Thrillers are normally characterized by fast pacing, frequent action and there opening scene are often quite slow paced and the lighting is often dark.

Conventions of a thriller genre include the: narrative, characters, locations, use of technical codes and semiotics. Characters in thrillers include criminals, stalkers, assassins, psychotic individuals and the heroes in most thrillers are frequently "hard men" used to danger: law enforcement officers, spies or soldiers. The themes of thrillers frequently include terrorism, political conspiracy, pursuit, or romantic triangles leading to murder.

Thriller films have now been sub categorised (we call these hybrids), Some of these are:- Action thrillers, Psychological thrillers, Adventure thriller, Crime thriller, Drama thriller, Sci-fi thriller and Film-Noir thrillers. A popular director, who has created a large amount of thriller movies, is Alfred Hitchcock. With movies such as "The Birds" and "Vertigo" his movies, were one of the founding and most influential types in the thriller genre. Some recent examples of a Thriller include - The Godfather, Pulp Fiction, The Dark Knight, Fight Club, The Silence of the Lambs and The Matrix.

One film that I have studied, Se7en is a successful thriller because it has all the components of a thriller film, it creates an uncomfortable edgy atmosphere from the start. There are several binary oppositions which creates a tone of conflict between the characters. It's also successful because of the un natural way the film has been put together through imagery and composition.


G.K Chesterton - The Transformed City
He said that the thriller genre was "the poetry of modern life" and how our world is drab and miserable but thrillers attempt to find excitement and adventure in it.
Northrop Frye - Heroic Performance
Frye says how the hero is always "one of us" doing extraordinary things which we tend to believe as they move in a world in which ordinary laws of nature still apply. He also says how the "enchanted forest" has been replaced by the modern city.
John Cawelti - The Exotic
Foreign artifacts/settings which turn a normal environment into an enchanted and mysterious place. Places which are unusual to us.
W.H.Matthews - Mazes & Labyrinths
An old story exampling this is the story of Theseus' quest to kill a minotaur, the hero goes on a journey with many twists as the maze is complex so the solution isn't easy, some examples for some of todays thrillers are films like Davinci Code & Se7en.
Pascal Bonitzer - Partial Vision
He said how what the audience can't see is very important as it builds suspense. He also said how it makes us feel like the answers are just around the killer as there is a need to catch the killer to a certain deadline.
Lars Ole Saurberg - Concealment & Protraction
Concealment is the deliberate hiding of something from the audience while Protraction is delayment of a suspected outcome e.g. Bomb countdown. These techniques are both used to increase suspense and to keep the audiences attention.
Noel Carroll - The Question ~ Answer Model
Developing questions for the audience to answer as there is a limited number of outcomes however the moral factor ('right outcomes') is usually the most desirable. Also the probability factor is a key role in thrillers as it's got to be realistic yet still seen as heroic as battling against the odds.

Section 2: Research into examples of thriller opening scenes =]



Film name : Se7en



Narrative Structure: - Straight from the beginning their are extreme close ups of things related to God & Religion, therefore implying what the film will be about. Also Seven makes us think, as it could be about a variety of events e.g. 7 deadly sins, 7 days in a week or it could be a countdown? Time is an important factor in this film, this could be a reason for the metranome as this is "calming as it counts time". There is unrestricted narration as it shows you how the killer plans out his murders however it withdraws this information from the character. It's presented with the titles then the opening scene, this could be done so the audience could create suspense.
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Settings: - It's set in a miserable, depressing unknown city. This is a typical convention for a thriller as the dark colours and anonymity of the city set an atmosphere which creates tension, this is important as it links into the theory that G.K Chesterton proposed about "the transformed city" of trying to find excitement in ordinary lives. The reason why the director wanted to keep the city unknown (other than creating a feeling of mystery) is that it could be set anywhere, making the audience think this could happen in reality, therefore broadening the target audience.
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Characters: - The characters are practically a contrast of each others personalities, as you can tell just from the opening that Detective Mills is a "doer" whilst Detective Somerset is a "thinker". There are many binary oppositions with the character e.g. Young/Old, Black/White, Experienced/Inexperienced, this could be interpreted as a conflict between each other, this is why the director chose these actors to play these certain roles as all these details have a meaning to them. At the start, you see Detective Somerset neatly put on a tie whilst wearing a suit, this could be stereotypically portrayed as an authority figures, as the majority of them wear suits. However Detective Mills comes in dressing casually "scruffy" clothes & starts to swear, the audience could have a pre concieved notion that this man isn't as higher class as him and more laid back. The character also owns a knife and a gun, this could connote he is involved in crime.
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Titles: - The colour schemes of the titles are black and white this could represent a binary opposition of good and evil. The colour red could connote many things like death or anger, this could give an insight into what the film might entail. The typography is quite childlike through the sequence which gives an eery atmosphere. All through the sequence it relates to God as he cuts a dollar bill that says "In God we trust" this could connote that he could be keeping God to himself or that he's playing God, so this could possibly give a motive to the killer e.g. "God told me to do it". The theme of religion also carries on when the song Closer - NIN is played and the only lyrics played is "You get me closer to God". The background sound uses noises like heartbeats & record scratching which is quite a repetitive high pitched, screechy noise gives off an awkward atmosphere making it uncomfortable for the audience to watch. It goes on to say "The eyes are the window to the soul" then further on you see the killer scribbling out the eyes of the lawyers wife, this could connote that she could be a victim as she has no "soul". The page turning could be a motif of time as this links back previously to the metranome, the book could also show that this person is clever and well educated so this shows that they're not meaningless killings and a lot of thought and planning has gone into this. When John Doe cuts off his fingerprints this shows the audience that he wants to be anonymous by becoming unidentifiable.






Film name: Red eye


Narrative Structure: - The first person shown is the main character therefore the audience gets to create a relationship with this person straight from the beginning. The opening is split into three different strands: - Domestic, Interior & Industrial Exterior. It also shows that the film isn't going to be about money as he throws the cards he finds away. It also has a sense of anonymity as no faces have been properly shown so it gives the film a sense of mystery.


Thriller Codes & Conventions: - The conventions used in this opening scene are the stereotypical thriller music & actors. It also creates a dark, mysterious scene which is already portrayed as being filled with lies and deceit. Another convention is constant enigma codes e.g. who is JR?


Camerawork: - There is a close tracking shot on a wallet therefore making it idiot proof so that the audience knows the wallet is significant. They use jerky POV pan shots and because of their use of smooth tracking shots, it makes them both stand out more clearly. The camera also zooms into the box of fish where it clearly says "South Florida Dun Sea Food" this lets the audience know the setting of the where the action is taking place.


Mise-en-Scene:- It starts by showing some family photos in it's "cosy" environment which shows that they are educated (Graduation photo) and it's also like an intro within an intro as the pictures show her in a sports outfit therefore it connotes that she is sporty, so this gives the audience a sense of pre-knowledge about the character. The wallet re occurs and there are various shots of just the wallet so this shows the importance of it. It also shows blueprints for a penthouse therefore once again making the audience aware of the possible crime.


Sound: - They play high tempo, fast paced music this could be used so that the action reflects the music. They also have a crescendo to build up the tension & the sound intensifies when "bad" things are about to happen. To make the audiences aware of a new setting, each sequence has its own type of music. Foley has been used in particular sound effects e.g. ripping of the envelope & glass breaking.


Graphics: - The colour scheme is black and white which contrasts with each other yet also giving off simplicity. They also save the "main" people until last e.g. Producer/Director/Screenplay. They also play the credits over the top of the scenes whilst moving closer and further away.
Editing:- They pace of editing changes throughout each sequence as the introduction is slow then when it's on the photos, it goes fast which then ends up going slow when it moves onto the van. As the sound becomes quicker the editing also becomes quicker, to build more tension between the audience and the film. They also use cross cutting between the situations and a number of dissolves.




Film name: State of Play




Narrative Structure: - It starts with a stereotypical chase scene therefore portraying the political crime genre. Also because the man who got shot is black, it could be seen to the audience as having a hint of racism in the plot. There is a clear structure as it goes equilibrium --> Disruption --> Resolution, which many thrillers have.


Thriller Codes & Conventions: - Simply from the beginning you can tell who the main character is because the main characters are generally the "bad guy" who drives the story through a motive. The chaser remains anonymous which builds up suspense through the scene. Also the briefcase could be classed as a thriller convention represented anonymity which could lead onto many questions, like "Who are they?" & "What's in the briefcase?” The film is set in a dark area; this is a stereotypical convention of the thriller genre as they rarely have bright colour settings.


Camerawork: - In the opening scene, they use an establishing shot to show the audience where the scene is being taken place. They do continuous takes with a Steadicam so that the audience constantly knows what’s going on & they vary between low & high angles to show superiority and danger. There are also a few close ups, this might make the audience feel more personal towards the character & it shows the strong emotion. Camerawork is also used to show power e.g. when the camera follows the gun. It also shows the conflict between characters as they are not in the same shot. At the end of the opening scene, they track forward on the victim to show the audience that he is still alive.


Editing & Sound: - In this scene, there are many diegetic sounds being used in the background, mostly just city noises e.g. cars. It's also used especially when the victim is panting as you could say that he is breathing his "last breathe" This is used to create more of a natural environment There is a crescendo to build up tension which turns into a gradual fade out. They don't use stereotypical music in this, they just use low diegetic sounds. There are long takes which result in slow editing in this sequence until the tension builds up. There is no cross cutting & they use very basic styles of editing.


Graphics: - Through typography it shows a binary opposition between good and evil, as the font is white and the background is black, this could also connote conflict. You can also tell that it is an American film as it sticks to theme colours of red, white & blue. Even though minimum graphics is used, it gives a good effect to the audience.


Mise-en-Scene: - It uses pathetic phallacy to set the scene as it's raining, which sets a dark and dingy scene. It is set in Washington at night (this could connote that this will be quite a political film as Washington is a political state). Through this opening scene, you can tell that the briefcase is of importance as it focuses in it clearly; so that it's obvious to the audience this is a key factor. Through Mise-en-Scene, there is a binary opposition between power & poverty; this is shown through the characters. Poverty is shown through the characters bad teeth, which could show that he is at the "wrong end of society" and possibly into drugs, just through analysing his appearance. It also shows the vulnerability of the old people, as the main man pushes straight into them frantically.




Film name: Strangers on a train


Narrative Structure: - Two strangers meet on a train (Bruno & Guy). Bruno imposes himself onto Guy and he suggests that they swap murders so they can't be linked. At the end of the sequence, Bruno takes it seriously whilst Guy brushes him off leaving it on a cliff-hanger. This brings the idea of fate and destiny being brought together through these two characters.

Thriller Codes & Conventions: - A convention used in this is the theme of anonymity, as they are unidentified characters which create mystery. They both come from taxis which gives off this idea as theirs cars can't show their personality & also for a limited amount of time, you only see below the waist. There are few binary oppositions in this, good/evil & white/black (clothing). Also many enigma codes are just used in this opening scene e.g. Why does he want his wife dead? Why is Bruno taking this so seriously?

Camerawork: - There is an establishing shot to make the audience aware of the location and setting. In the 50's, cinematography was limited; however the use of shot reverse shot really can interest an audience to create suspense. Also for the majority of the beginning it's just low level, but still tells the story of the two meeting, this could still entice the audience to carry on watching to see who these people are. However this low level could also connote that the audience should feel inferior to them, and these characters are more important. There is eventually a two shot, which represents equality because if there were signs of conflicts, they wouldn't be in the same shot.

Editing & Sound: - As the sequence starts there is several amounts of cross cutting used in this sequence, between Bruno & Guy, however they start off as separate individuals then brought together by a two shot. The sound is old fashioned & isn't stereotypically "creepy". It is upbeat, loud and quite exaggerated which doesn't fit with the genre so it could be to show that this isn't a stereotypical thriller. They both have musical motifs, Bruno's is very dark & creepy which could imply to the audience that he is the "bad guy". However Guy's is very cheerful & calm.

Graphics: - The typography is quite varied, as although all the titles are shown in a massive bold font, there is a mixture of writing styles. The titles are also done, typical to its era, as the last title says "Directed by" showing the most importance, also no colour is involved to create a minimalistic atmosphere. Even though the majority of the audience isn't interested in the titles, he has chosen to do this in a specific way to create a greater affect without them noticing.



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Mise-en-Scene: - They both come out of taxi's which creates the effect of anonymity as cars can be known to show someones personality and it's hard to track anyone that takes taxi's. They are shown to bring luggage which could seem that they could be travelling for a while or going to stay somewhere. As you can tell by Bruno's shoes, he seems to be a bit eccentric and they are both dressed smart which could make them seem wealthy & important. The clothes that Bruno wears could be seen as quite "mummsy" and the reason his "psychotic" personality could be linked back to Freudians theories. The train tracks could connote a journey of life and the crossing of the tracks could be interpreted as Bruno & Guy's lives emerging together and that it was destiny that they both met. Also you can never travel backwards on trains, only forwards this could be a metaphor that they both can't turn back to their previous lives. One thing about the trains, is that many strangers meet together with their own private lives to do something together.







Film name: Sin City


Narrative Structure: - The opening scene is the first story of 4 throughout the film called The Customer is always right, it's based on the depression of a woman who arranged for someone to kill her. Throughout the opening scene, you can tell that there must be an alternative motive through their meeting due to their body language however it comes as a shock when he kills her as in the previous shots they seem to be midly flirting with each other.

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Thriller Codes & Conventions: - Many thriller conventions were used in this opening scene, the setting is one of them as it's set in quite a mundane urban city. Also a gun is used at the end of this sequence, and guns are mostly related to the thriller genre. There are many binary oppositions used in this e.g. Light/Dark, Colour/Black & White & Male/Female.


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Camerawork: - The sequence starts with a high angle shot so that you can get acquainted with the setting. Then it goes into a long shot which lasts quite a while, this is done because you see the characters becoming closer as he walks closer to her. They use close ups of the cigarettes and lighter this could make the audience think that they are important as it puts all the focus on these inanimate objects rather the characters themselves. Mig shots & over the shoulder shots are used during their conversation to get to know the characters, yet also show that they haven’t come together yet possibly due to conflict or lack of trust so they focus on one character at a time. There gradual relationship is shown through a mid shot to a gradual close up however at the end of the sequence, high angle shot was used which could connote her vulnerability.


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Mise-en-Scene: - The scene starts with the women in the centre wearing a bright red dress whilst the background is set in black and white, the colour makes the audience focus on this character to show that she is important also the red dress could connote love or danger, however it could also connote blood because of the ending. The bright lights of the party was done so that the man is shadowed so you can't see him, this could create mystery. Both of them are dressed formally so that it shows that they are at quite a formal party, this could signify that there meeting is also formal. The gun uses very phallic imagery; this could show the superiority of the man as he takes her life, the gun also takes up half the screen so that audience automatically focuses on it.


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Editing & Sound: - Slow editing is used in the opening scene; this is shown through the long takes, as the shots last for a while. They normally do this for quieter & more emotional scenes to create a greater effect, which you can also tell from the body language between the characters as they are both, relaxed yet it creates tension. They create this atmosphere so that the ending is more of a shock to the audience. They use various editing techniques through the scene, like shot reverse shot; this is used so that the audience can feel like they are actually in the scene with them producing more realism. The colour is one of the main features of this scene, and the film, as the only colours used in this scene is black, white, red and green however it’s cleverly used to intrigue the audience, as it’s not like other films, however the way it is presented is because it’s based on the comic books. The background is mainly black, white or grey; this makes the red dress stand out even more showing importance. Another great use of colour is when the women’s eyes light up green, this makes the audience focus on them, it also could connote jealousy for the male.



Film name: Clockwork Orange

Narrative Structure :- A Clockwork Orange is a psychological thriller that symbolises violence and how modern society deals with it. It starts with just an orange background and gothic music in the background, this could show that orange will be a key colour throughout the film, then it cuts to Alex who is staring into the camera, this shot lasts for a while, this shows the audience that Alex is the main character and important to the storyline. It cuts tracks outwards to discover others in the Korova Milkbar. This then leads onto a drunk singing who then eventually gets mocked and violently attacked by them.

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Thriller Codes & Conventions :- There are many thriller codes and conventions in this sequence, there are the stereotypical "creepy" music and the overal mise en scene creates a dark setting. From the beginning, you can tell that Alex will be the main character so he will be the one who controls the story. We are instantly introduced to violence however from the first two sequences there is a binary opposition of peace and agression. The Mise en scene also displays thriller conventions as naked mannequins are used as tables, which gives the effect of perversion.

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Camera work :- In the first sequence, the camerawork is simple as it is just a long tracking shot from a close up to a long shot, this was done to show the audience the entire room to feel more aware of it yet it was also done in slowly and steadily to create an expression of unease for the audience. In the second sequence it starts with just a body of a drunk hiding his face, this could create a sense of anonymity of a person unknown, this could connote that the man himself could represent a number of different people to keep it generalisable. Then it quickly tracks outwards to see the long silhouetted shadows of the men, unrestricted narration is done so that the audiences can feel tension knowing that something is about to happen. Then there is a long shot of the four men walking towards the drunk with bright lightning behind them to show their long shadows, this could have been done to show their superiority over the drunken man, as he is lying down whilst they’re standing above him. The long shot is also used to show the audience that the setting is completely empty with no one else to help. It cuts from the drunken man lying on the floor to a close up of Alex above him, this too can symbolise the power that he has over him. The end shot is a long shot of the men violently beating the drunken man, they used a long shot to show that all of the men are joining in and to give the audience a greater effect of the seriousness of the situation.

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Sound :- The music played in the background is comprises classical music and electronic synthetic music with a slow beat, this is very effective as it gradually builds up over time, making the audience build up tension. The dialogue is in Nadsat which also gives a sense of sinister weirdness, throughout the sequence these slang words are used like “droogs” & “rassoodocks”, this shows the audience that these characters are beyond normality.


Section 3: Brainstorm of ideas for your film =]





We had seven ideas for our thriller :-



  • An abduction - Abduction of a child, parents forced her to terminate the pregnancy. Seeks comfort in stealing a child

  • A stalker - A man who stalks his high school crush as she just recently moves into his neighbourhood OR instead of the high school crush, a famous women.

  • Female mass murderer - A women who goes around killing all the sleazy men she can find and her motive would be that she has been cheated on countless times.

  • Possessed - A child gets possessed from a demon, when they all think it's just schizophrenia, and it eventually ends up getting worse and worse.

  • Two people plan to meet up even though they have only ever talked on the Internet, but they share one thing in common, how they both share the desire to kill someone

  • Flashbacks - An old man starts having flashbacks from his past, he first just thinks it's old age, but he then progressively realises something he blocked out from his past as he starts to believe that he's back into World War 1, he starts to kill innocent people.

  • "I know who killed me" - A ghost appears to this women reoccurring so that she can finally put the criminal who killed her away and finally get peace at last.

However at the last minute, we had to change our idea for our film, due to the resources and actors we used.

Section 4: Audience Research - & research into BBFC film classification system =]

The Questions :-

1. What gender are you?
Male
Female

2. What is your age?
13 – 16
17 – 19
20 – 23
24 +

3. What type of thrillers do you like?
Fantasy Thriller
Romantic Thrillers
Political Thriller
Crime Thriller
Supernatural Thriller
Psychological Thriller

4. How would you like the opening of a thriller movie to be set out?
Titles and then opening
Opening and then titles
Titles when opening is happening

5. Do you prefer to watch a male lead role or female lead role in a film?
Male lead
Female lead
Don’t Mind

6. Do you enjoy ambiguity or a give away plot line?
A psycho where you don’t find out until the end
When you know the person from the start

7. What’s your preferred length of a film?
60-90 minutes
90-120 minutes
120 + minutes

8. What certificate films do you prefer to watch?
PG
12
15
18

9. What do you think makes a good thriller?
Suspense
Action
Twists
Cliff hangers

10. How many main characters are too many?
1 – 3
4 – 6
7 – 9

11. On a scale of 1 – 10, how would you rate the thriller genre in terms of entertainment? (10 being highest) ___________

12. Do you prefer the film to either:
Challenge the audience actively
Explain the plot fully throughout the film

13. Tick the films you have watched:
The Beach
What Lies Beneath
Battle Royale
Donnie Darko
Se7en
Sin City
The Birds
The Butterfly Effect
The Dark Knight

14.Does the name of the film intrigue you to go and watch the film?
Yes
No
Doesn’t Matter

15.Do you think that different actors are good for different parts?
Yes
No
Doesn’t Matter

16. Do you think that music is important for the film?
Yes
No

17. Do you think that light and sound are important in making the scene tenser?
Yes
No

18.Do you think there is a limit to how many deaths there are in a film?
Yes
No

19. Do you know any famous thriller directors? If yes, please state.

20. Would you prefer the killer to be anonymous all through the film or be revealed from the start?
Anonymous
Revealed

The Results: -


Question 1

Question 2

Question 3
Question 4
Question 5

Question 6


Question 7
In Question 8, 1 person said they chose PG, 1 person said they chose 12, 15 people said they would prefer a 15, however the majority with 23 was the 18 rating.

Question 9

Question 10

In Question 11 the average rating of entertainment was 7


Question 12


Question 13
Question 14

Question 15


Question 16

Question 17


Question 18


In Question 19, there was a variety of directors, the main ones mentioned were M.Night Shyamalan, Alfred Hitchcock & Stephen Speilberg



Section 5: Treatment =]

The Ripper is a dramatic thriller filled with suspense with many different twists. It will be a certificate 15 as there is only mild swearing and scenes of violence, there are no references to sex or drugs.

Concept:- A boy becomes a murderer who eventually gets locked in a mental institution but escapes & goes on a killing spree, however the police are out to catch him.

Synopsis:-
Beginning:- Charles was a regular boy, he played out like every other 10 year old, throughout the years he started to develop this unhealthy obsession, unknown to his parents he collect dead animals and stored them in the shed, at the end of the garden. Each animal increasing in size as the years past on. Charles was about 16, he moved out to pursue his education, or so his parents thought, however one day, he committed the most unholy act, killing another human being. He kept this secret from his parents for a number of years; at 18 they bought him a house to congratulate him on his exam results. However his parents were still totally unaware that he had an extremely dark sadistic side. He abducted women and decapitated them, storing them in the basement of this new house. Charles was a loner, a lost sheep. He remained to himself but did have the odd friend and he didn’t venture out into clubs and bars like any other teenager, he just wanted to stay at home.

Middle:- When Charles had friends over he wouldn’t leave them alone for to long, just in case they were to root around and find that he had an extremely sadistic secret. This friendship of his soon developed into a relationship and Charles and Annie soon started dating, he kept this secret from her and acted like there was nothing wrong. They soon moved their relationship to the next level, and Annie moved in with Charles causing him to move all this items to the basement of his new house. The months past on, and Annie decided to end the relationship with Charles, saying she’s found someone else. One night a devastated Charles released his secret upon Annie, kidnapping her and torturing her in the house she once called home. Days became months and people started to wonder where Annie was, what had happened to her? And why wasn’t she answering her calls? The police soon got involved and all the evidence came back to Charles, he was the last person to have contact with her, the last to see her. They brought him in for questioning but he remained silent. The police were getting nowhere. Eventually they got a warrant to search his house, and soon found out his sadistic hidden secret. They found Annie along with numerous other female victims hidden away in his basement out of sight from any wondering eye. He was convicted of murder and was sent to a mental institution for the criminally insane. But what would happen in the next few years would change history forever!

End:- As the years passed, Charles came up with a plan on how to escape. He knew everything about times, where people were. He’d been watching them for that long, yet they were all completely unaware of what would happen next. Days passed and Charles saw his chance to escape and took it. Back on the streets, she sought revenge on the female population. His addiction had taken over him; he was like a chain smoker going cold turkey something which would only lead to the person back into that bad habit. And it was true; Charles started to kill again, but remained completely anonymous from the police and they didn’t expect anything. Since they couldn’t find him, they couldn’t stop the murders. He stumbled around town in need of his next fix, following woman around like a love sick puppy. Eventually he saw his chance to kill again; he followed 3 girls and killed each one. However unknowing to him, each of them dropped and item which would lead in Charles recapture.

Opening Scene:-
The opening scene is shot in only 2 locations, the park & a retirement home - "mental institution". The sequence starts with Charles escaping the retirement home, and then it goes to a shot of Natalie & Melissa walking in the park with Sophie following behind them. One by one, the girls get murdered leaving an item of theirs behind.

Target Audience:-
The film should appeal to a older teenage audience - 15 ~ 19 - because the thriller would be intrigued to the violence and to the sadistic plot line however it could also attract an older audience, as it's set in everyday life therefore it's more realistically appealing.

Section 6: Character outlines & Script =]

Charles
Age 20
Has a sadistic personality

Melissa
Age 16
A respected student

Sophie
Age 17
Confident & Loves Attention

Natalie
Age 16
Shy & quiet

Retirement home

Non diegetic grunge music plays in the background.
Wide shot of the building as Charles escapes into a wooded area.
He looks back suspiciously whilst jumping over obstacles.

Bank Park

The camera pans slowly on Melissa & Sophie whilst they are walking through the park.
Natalie follows them from a distance looking rather melancholy.
From different angles, the following continues.
Charles drags Natalie whilst covering her mouth into the bushes un-noticed by Melissa & Sophie.
A phone is displayed lying in the leaves.
Charles runs through the bushes.
Whilst Sophie & Melissa are walking, Sophie is dragged into the bushes by Charles.
Her purse is left in the bushes.
An asynchronous scream is played over the image of Melissa lying on the floor.
It then pans to the sky to a tree.

Section 7: Production Material - Storyboards & shotlists =]






After this storyboard was made, we had to change the story, due to lack off actors & we couldn't find the right scenes to set it in, so we changed it by reducing the amount of actors used & setting it in local public places.

Section 8: Recce & Location sheets =]







For this film, we used two locations. The first location that we used was Bank park because the park had a large amount of tall bushes were the villain could hide also because it was secluded, it gave more of a creepy atmosphere to the film. The second location that we used for the film was a retirement home for the elderly. We filmed during the day so that lighting wouldn't be an issue. This location was perfect for a scene of some one escaping as from the outside it looks like a mental institution. Also because of little things like there being puddles everywhere to fit the scene and the fact that were we filmed was an isolated area so there was very little traffic and people in the shot, also we were able to film for free on all locations as these were public places.


Section 9: Production Schedule =]

Name of Film : The Ripper
Directors : Bekah Caddick
Producers : Josh Hindley & Michael Harper & Kirsteii Brown
Client : OCR Exam Board

Date Production Started : 6th December
Treatment Started : 27th November
Storyboard Started : 25th November
Shooting Started : 6th December
Post Production Started : 4th January
Rough Cut Submitted : 18th January
Final Show Tape Completed : 22nd January

Location equipment required : Camera & Tripod

Section 10: Edit Decision List =]








Section 11: Audience Feedback =]

Our target audience gave us significant information about how well our film was presented, and how to improve it. Firstly, the audience commented on the acting skills, even though this was not a critical piece of feedback, it showed that the audience liked watching the film as they believed the acting was sufficient enough, and that they enjoyed seeing the actors playing their parts. Secondly, they believed that the editing was "really good" they thought that a film needs to have a sufficient edit in order to make it look more professional and therefore this would entice them to watch more of it. They also liked how the scream overlapped the music in order to create that feeling of mystery, they didn't get to see how this character died, but they were intrigued and wanted to know why. Thirdly, they like the whole continuity of the film, the fact that parts of the film looked like it was all filmed in one take. They also thought the match on action was pretty good, they believed that having good match on action is another vital part in making a film a lot better and having good match on action made the film a lot more professional.

They thought the narrative structure was about a man kidnapping ladies, and leaving clues behind in order for them to be found. This was closely related to our idea, the fact that this man is going around killing girls, and clues are left in order for him to be found. Therefore the audience gained some knowledge about what our film was about.

They gave us critical criticisms about how to improve our project, the first set of critical feedback, was about the writing, and how having it placed in a certain way would make it easier for the audience to understand, therefore we changed the layout of the wording to make it appeal more to the target audience. They also thought the music went well with what was happening; therefore music would play a vital role in making a film. The fact the audience didn't know that there was a specific time difference meant we had to insert on in, in order for them to understand that there was a passing of time, and it all didn't happen in one day. Overall the feedback was positive and there was only a small amount of improvements need for the film.






Section 12: Analysis of completed sequence

Q1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge the forms and conventions of real life products?

The film Jack the Ripper influenced our idea of making our film as it's based on actual events as many people are interested in him also the character creates mystery, but at the same time, it also gives a pre-conceived idea of what the film might be about. Both Jack the Ripper and our character kill females for unknown reasons, so this might make the audience question the film & to try to figure out why he is doing this which keeps them more entertained.

Our media product has applied to thriller conventions and theories by Noel Carroll's theory, The Question Answer Model, as the sequence, we have tried to make the audience question what they are seeing like Who is the guy? How did he escape? And who will find the victims items?




Q2. How does your media product represent particular social groups?


This could represent "stereotypical" criminals as his appearance portrays this, through his sternful agressive facial expression. Also his clothes are very simplistic and toned down, this focuses more on his looks than the background. This could make the audience realise that this man is the killer through the masculine male criminal stereotype as in many films this look has also been explored. Also the low angle could show the superiority of the male character, this connotes that men have the control and power in society not just in modern times but also in the past.

In our film we are representing the young females of the modern age and how they are affected by crimes. Once again, these were chosen because of stereotypes, as these females look like the typical innocent, vulnerable girls who can't defend themselves. Also they were chosen because they look like normal and average so this could represent the females. It's also a thriller convention that the victims are female because males are seen to be able to look after themselves, whilst women are helpless. The helpless women makes us feel the need to bond with those characters, to try and protect them from future harm. However it does break normal conventions because recently in the modern era, women have came out top as 'the final girl', even though this convention is generally more expressed in the horror genre, the idea has been expressed more frequently recently. The picture presented below could portray the women as strong and independant, yet we don't know whether they will overpower the criminal or not. This is one of the basic conventions as we constantly want the audience to ask questions about the sequence.









Q3. What kind of media institute might distribute your media product and why?




The type of institution that would distribute my media production would be Film4, for the fact that this media institution distributes independent films made by independent film makers. Also because this has a wide target audience, more people would watch it therefore giving them more publicity. ( www.wildsound-filmmaking-feedback-events.com/film_distributing) Even though it doesn't personally distribute media products, it does give advice on where to look and what can make a low budget film successful to it's distributors. Our film could be distributed by the company Snowfall Films ( http://www.snowfallfilms.com/ ) as they are interested in low budget films. Also http://www.iofilm.co.uk/ - "Distribution consultant Peter Broderick says filmmakers should consider new strategies for distributing their films to avoid future disappointment".

Q4. Who would be the audience for your film?

My target audience would mostly consist of teenagers, as the storyline is based around them & the majority of the actors are teenagers so this could make them relate to the characters through modern times making it seem more realistic. Males are most likely to be interested than females, as through research, they normally prefer the thriller genre and because the main character is male they can connect more. However females can relate as well as females because of society are generally more concerned about defending themselves if anyone attacks them, this could make them intrigued to watch it, as the title sequence implies this man only goes for women, therefore there might be a female hero at the end. We also chose teenagers as our target audience, as they are more likely to be the ones to go to the cinemas and watch it, as the majority have more time on their hands than an adult with a full time job. Also we needed audience feedback to find out what people want to watch and the majority of people we asked were teenagers, so the film suggested is from a teenagers viewpoint of what a good film would be.












Q5. How did you attract/address your audience?






The audience said that our films strengths were the actors & the way it was edited, as it ran smoothly due to continuity. They also mentioned the sound used gave a good effect because the background music stopped while the asynchronous played. The narrative structure was clear as they understood what was going on in the sequence however our weaknesses were about the typography as white font ran over a white background so it was hard to see. Due to this audience feedback, we made the necessary adjustments to make it better.




Q6. What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?



Throughout using the editing software, I have learnt numerous things about how to create a film, using specific techniques. I have learnt how to create black video, to place at the start and in places throughout the film. Our title is placed at the end of the film, in order to keep the audience in suspense. We used a razor tool in order to cut different parts of the film out, and to cut down the music in order, to make it fit with the final product. Numerous titles were used during the film, and were placed at a clear distance apart from each other, in order to make it look more professional. I have also learnt how to use the XM2, this helped me realise how important lighting is in a sequence and the variety of ways you can shoot an angle.





Q7. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?






I have learnt a variety of new skills as I've progressed from my preliminary task to my AS Media Thriller sequence, not just through using the technology but also learning the new media termonology.