Section 11: Audience Feedback =]

Our target audience gave us significant information about how well our film was presented, and how to improve it. Firstly, the audience commented on the acting skills, even though this was not a critical piece of feedback, it showed that the audience liked watching the film as they believed the acting was sufficient enough, and that they enjoyed seeing the actors playing their parts. Secondly, they believed that the editing was "really good" they thought that a film needs to have a sufficient edit in order to make it look more professional and therefore this would entice them to watch more of it. They also liked how the scream overlapped the music in order to create that feeling of mystery, they didn't get to see how this character died, but they were intrigued and wanted to know why. Thirdly, they like the whole continuity of the film, the fact that parts of the film looked like it was all filmed in one take. They also thought the match on action was pretty good, they believed that having good match on action is another vital part in making a film a lot better and having good match on action made the film a lot more professional.

They thought the narrative structure was about a man kidnapping ladies, and leaving clues behind in order for them to be found. This was closely related to our idea, the fact that this man is going around killing girls, and clues are left in order for him to be found. Therefore the audience gained some knowledge about what our film was about.

They gave us critical criticisms about how to improve our project, the first set of critical feedback, was about the writing, and how having it placed in a certain way would make it easier for the audience to understand, therefore we changed the layout of the wording to make it appeal more to the target audience. They also thought the music went well with what was happening; therefore music would play a vital role in making a film. The fact the audience didn't know that there was a specific time difference meant we had to insert on in, in order for them to understand that there was a passing of time, and it all didn't happen in one day. Overall the feedback was positive and there was only a small amount of improvements need for the film.